Captain John-Bob Copernicus the Third (snoozleberg) wrote in lil_cloud,
Captain John-Bob Copernicus the Third
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SHE SAID SEX *gasp*

I need a life



The first time Zig had sex was with a girl called Mary. She had short red hair and they had done it in her bedroom while her parents watched CNN on the kitchen tv.
It had been awkward and Mary, who was more experienced than Zig probably ever would be, had faked an orgasm in an attempt to avoid him being embarressed. She wasnt a very good actor. Afterwards he had wanted to lie with his head on her chest but she wanted a cigarette and had gone outside to smoke. He had felt lonely and immature.
It was nothing like his second time.
Afterwards he and Squid had lay in the dusty lake, staring at the sky and talking about the things they missed most about home.
Zig had felt really good.
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you know i love you.
you know Zig loves you.
you know that this story is just gorgeous.

so why did I comment? that is a mystery to all.
*mysterious fog obscures screen*

wooosh
That was very, very awesome.

And very, very beautiful.
Why thankyou
you know I think this is the best story yet at ol' lil_cloud. w00t!!
Totally no way. This story is el lameo
i love it to deeeeeeeeeeeeeath!
Dude. This place is *green* now. Green! Who knew? Obviously, a lot of people that aren't me. But still. I stand by my outrage.

Anywaaaaay, I dropped by because I remembered that this story was quite awesome and that I hadn't commented. I especially like the first paragraph. It feels really surreal and really normal, and since you have inspired a paradox in me, I'd say your work here is done.
CAPTAIN PARADOX



I get a cape.
THIS PLACE AND MY JOURNAL STILL EXIST.

Its warping my mind shivvy